SOBRDRIVE

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SOBRDRIVE is a voluntary personal BAC monitoring system that helps prevent drunk driving and underage drinking — and keeps the people who care about you connected to your safety.
Built on the most accurate fuel-cell breathalyzer technology available and our patented Sober On Start™ vehicle protection, SOBRDRIVE helps prevent a vehicle from starting until a passing breath test is taken. It's a complete platform for individuals, families, schools, courts, and organizations who want education, engagement, encouragement, and accountability in one place.
WHAT SOBRDRIVE DOES

Accurate BAC testing — Professional fuel-cell breathalyzer technology for reliable, repeatable readings.
Sober On Start™ vehicle protection — Pairs with your in-vehicle module to help prevent the engine from starting until you pass a breath test.
PANIC safety alerts — Instantly share your location with your chosen emergency contacts when you need help, with video to follow automatically — hands-free.
Remote activation — Administrators, guardians, or program managers can enable monitoring from anywhere, no physical access required.
Scheduled BAC testing — Set recurring test windows so monitoring runs consistently and automatically, on your schedule.
Complete data sharing — Test history and activity stay visible to participants and their support network, building trust and accountability.

Voluntary by design and flexible enough for families, schools, courts, and organizations alike, SOBRDRIVE turns good intentions into a real, supported plan.
SOBRDRIVE does not guarantee prevention of any outcome and is intended as one part of a responsible approach to alcohol safety. Remember: Buzzed Driving is Drunk Driving.